Free Life Fantasy Online: Immortal Princess (Light Novel) Vol. 7
P**N
Entertaining enough, but it feels the translation is a bit sloppy
To be honest, I am not entirely sure why I enjoy reading this series. The characters are fine, the game feels like a game except for the unique stuff that happens to various characters, but I can accept that as necessary for the story. It is very much slice-of-life with at times a bit too much attention to details while rushing through other scenes. The obsession with breasts and somewhat cringe jokes are to be expected. It just that overall not much happens, and I also feel that either the translation needs some work or the author lost track in some scenes. Some of the descriptions were confusing, and I got the impression characters were mixed up. I could fill in the gaps based on what we know of the various characters, and likely missed it as a result more than that I spotted it, but it is sloppy. Still, I do enjoy the quick read for what it is, nothing exceptional, but entertaining enough for what it is.
K**O
Was there any proof reading done?
Im just reading through first chapter of this book, and i wonder, previous books didnt have such issue, this one however has so many errors or completely illogical wording in the very first chapter that im scared of reading further... Please try to fix that, i want to enjoy this book, not to wonder why Skelly uses uses gravitas orb when Anastasia said she will use it, and the party comment about her low mana because she used it... Or stuff like this "When there’re two yellow golemen, Mr. Skelly and I both bind them, leaving Mr. Skelly to cast the pillars. I’m the one with the more efficient binds, after all."... Wtf...
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